Friday, 8 February 2013

Writing Warm Up-by will

"The names Bruce,the biggest baddest shark in the ocean"."Nice to meet you Bruce I'm John the smallest shark in the whole ocean"."I'm felling a little hungry".He smirked.He gulped John up in one bite.Little did he know that John was the son of the legendary whale shark who has never been seen.He is now being hunted by the whale shark.That night he started having nightmares about being killed by a dark sole.
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown14 February 2013 at 11:19

    We love the start of your story Will. Are you reading stories about sharks? We wonder how this story would end. From Room 22

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  2. Anonymous14 February 2013 at 20:15

    Nice writing Will, nice discriptive language features

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