Friday, 22 February 2013

The Ending of Eric's Story


The helicopter went ahead of me! The victim hits the spike strip that the helicopter dropped. I get angry and I start smashing into the criminal. I get ahead of the criminal. He's on my tail. I drop a spike strip take down! YAY!!!! I finished the mission and i got promoted to patrol man.

2 comments:

  1. Wow! What an exciting finish Eric. ~ :)

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  2. thats really good ending it's very creative i like the describing words!

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